Thrown Vessel

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Assignment: Journal free assignment - Poem about ceramics, without using the words "clay", "vessel" or "wheel"

Response:
Cold, damp, firm
Spinning faster, and faster yet
Hands wet, touch it
Smooth, creamy to the touch

Press in hard, it reacts
It bends to the will of the hands
Press in, its tall
Press down, its fat

The reactions are exact
The movement is fluid
As if pushing water,
Captured without gravity

Only two dimensions
Height and Width
Up and Out
What one side does
The other respects

Press the thumb into the center
Pull towards you
The space opens
Negative space is created

Thumb and index finger together
Pinch a lump from the bottom
Unroll the lump up the wall
Feel it stretch beneath the fingers

Swift, smooth motions
Graceful pulls
Gentle curves
Easy touch on
Easy release off

Open further
Shiny surface
Glistening body
Stretching further

Almost about to burst
Standing rigid with soft tension
One more pull will collapse
No more spinning

Curves like rolling hills
Color of light chocolate
Standing tall and wide
Smooth rounded lip

The work is done
Strike below on the steel head
Fingers beneath the foot
Twist and lift

The world holds its breath
No machine creates that reaction
Throwing lines are still visible
A million finger prints
Identifying creator of this bowl

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